The Enchanted Portals
By Norman
Hello my name is john
and I live in Miami. Once when I was 3 I went to my favorite water park which
was next to a forest. The forest was on palm beach. It was very dark . now that
i am 7 while i was in that same water park fishing, i caught a peacock BASS,
then the rod got stuck on my sock and i fished my sock, it smelled awful. Then
I smelled sometsing stinky. It was not like the smell of my sock then I noticed
it. It smelled like cooked fart. My big brother is 9. His name is amary
and when I peeked into the forest A HAND PULLED ME INTO THE FOREST. It
was my old friend, sometimes I call him nasty but his real name is Borja
but he looked waaaaaay different.
i said: “what are you
doing herE borja?”
Borja said: “the
forest is mysterious.”
I asked him:
“why borja?”
He said:
“people tried to see why it was mysterious.”
then i told borja to
keep on going
Then 10 minutes later
we fell in quicksand. borja got out. I told him to help me.
After he got me out I
saw a spooky mansion and Borja entered. We went to the last floor and we saw a
purple portal. We entered the portal ...
And we
appeared in a pirate boat. the leader said: “ATTACK!!!” WE
fought back..
Me and Borja threw 2
pirates to the water and got 1 sword for each one. Then 20 min later it
was only me and Borja vs the captain. He pushed me to the plank in the birk of
death. I slided between his legs and pushed him to the plank. Then since
the sharks left, we opened the chest, there were materials to make a portal. We
found obsidian and rocks. When we left the ship we got to land and we started
building the portal. When we were building we saw Lucas, my bff, then he
helped us make the portal, but before that I said: ”where did you come from
lucas?”
Lucas said he
came from a portal in a spooky mansion. when we finished making the
portal we saw
Something inside. AND we entered. We appeared in a wrestling stagE vs a
caveman. He said: ”wo wo hai shi hoo ho hoo.” we were like: “is this a kind of
caveman age?” we wrestled against him and we won. then a portal appeared
next to us, we entered and then everyone appeared in their houses couches.
THE END

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