The Enchanted Portals


                  
   By Norman

Hello my name is john and I live in Miami. Once when I was 3 I went to my favorite water park which was next to a forest. The forest was on palm beach. It was very dark . now that i am 7 while i was in that same water park fishing, i caught a peacock BASS, then the rod got stuck on my sock and i fished my sock, it smelled awful. Then I smelled sometsing stinky. It was not like the smell of my sock then I noticed it. It smelled  like cooked fart. My big brother is 9. His name is amary and when I peeked into the forest  A HAND PULLED ME  INTO THE FOREST. It was my old friend,  sometimes I call him nasty but his real name is Borja but he looked waaaaaay different.
i said: “what are you doing herE borja?”
Borja said: “the forest is mysterious.”
I asked him:  “why borja?”
He said:  “people tried to see why it was mysterious.”
then i told borja to keep on going
Then 10 minutes later we fell in quicksand. borja got out. I told him to help me.
After he got me out I saw a spooky mansion and Borja entered. We went to the last floor and we saw a purple portal. We entered the portal ...

And we appeared  in a pirate boat. the leader said: “ATTACK!!!” WE fought back..

Me and Borja threw 2 pirates to the water and got 1 sword for each one. Then 20 min later  it was only me and Borja vs the captain. He pushed me to the plank in the birk of death. I slided between his legs and pushed him to the plank. Then since the sharks left, we opened the chest, there were materials to make a portal. We found obsidian and rocks. When we left the ship we got to land and we started building the portal. When we were building we  saw Lucas, my bff, then he helped us make the portal, but before that I said: ”where did you come from lucas?”

Lucas  said he came from a portal in a spooky mansion. when we finished making the
portal we saw Something inside. AND we entered. We appeared in a wrestling stagE vs a caveman. He said: ”wo wo hai shi hoo ho hoo.” we were like: “is this a kind of caveman age?”  we wrestled against him and we won. then a portal appeared next to us, we entered and then everyone appeared in their houses couches.


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